fox writing - the sequel

It was a frosty Dawn as dog awoke with an arrow through his heart.He was not having a good start to his day. he was mad / crying because of what his former best friend had done. Well dog was having a moment he did not know magpie was coming back.

This is Just beginning of magpies journey home. she was very hurt by Foxes painful words,  now they're in her head.  Stumbling home Magpie was thinking of the consequences of what she had done.

When Magpie finally reached home dog has fallen asleep. Almost as fast as someone who had just run a marathon. She thought, when dog wakes up, will he be happy? That is the complete opposite  of what dog was thinking in his furious mind. “ Even if he is happy he will know about the Incident  with Fox” whispered magpie to herself.

The swirling went in the night sky was like The windmills she visited when she could fly.She had that feeling when someone is using you, you can tell. But she wasn’t too sure.

Usually when dog woke He would great magpie with a gently morning, but this time He just snarled.  Magpie was wrong she knew something was happening. “Morning”Said magpie in encouraging voice.

“Why” Mumbled fox “Why” he Repeated loudly. “We were good team” He snarled again.

Then he ran away.

There magpie was alone like fox said. she had this non-stop pain pain in her heart. She lost her one and only friend It was her fault The pain was still there as she hobbled in the direction of Fox.

                                  By Cohen

maths

Hi guys this is my maths and I got 100 in 4.55 seconds in my basic facts test. my lpg was 9 multiplication and division facts. see ya later guys.

reading

this week for reading i did my te reo sheet it is yet to be done

writing

this is my letter writing to Gus s s in a clip called "partly cloudy". my lpg g g was 3 i can edit and recraft t t to make sure my writing makes sense .

inquiry

This morning we started learning about oceans.
I found out that blue marlin like higher temperature and to feed on the surface to eat jack macs and tuna also meat balls (circle shaped school of fish). Also go deep and eat squid.
Later on, I want to find out what is the biggest marlin caught ever.

reeading

Im reading this book called "the crocodile nest" I am up to the part when Hams dog Spock dies by a cassowary. Because Chizza killed the cassowary chick. An awesome book by Des Hunt.

maths

this is my maths this week. my lpg was 5 converting decimals to fractions and convert fractions to decimals. and solving multiplication problems with a range of strategies.

this is my writing

this week I did my publishing for our writing of "mr Bs finger". my lpg was 17

writing

this is my plan and one page of my writing blast my lpg was 9 I can make sure that most of my writing is grammatically correct, and my verbs agree with correct tense.

2nd and 3rd pages .

                                                                    last page.

maths

this is my maths word problems. my lpg was I can do word problems using devision, multiplication and adding.

writing

this is my plan and a piece of my story.


this is the rest of my letter to pod 2. it was about our favourite memory about school. I did a time we had a ripper fun day. My lpg was 8 i can proofread my work by checking that the punctuation is in the right place.

reading

This week for reading we did pooch pearson the old 81. my lpg was i can read more fluently out loud. 

writing

this is my fathers day card metaphors. my lpg was 17.

reading

this is my reading response. my l-p-g was 12. we did it about the story friday night out.

maths

this is my maths for this week. my lpg was 23

maths

writing

this is my quick story of what is going to happen on cross-country on thursday. My lpg was 19.

reading

this weak for reading we did honest joe my lpg was when i read out loud i need o read more fluently.

maths

this is my basic fats this this week i got 100 in 6.07 my lpg was 13

Maths

This for maths we did equivalent fractions and I got a good score on basic facts. My lpg was 17.

This week we did persuasive writing my log is 12

maths

• these are our 2d shapes my lpg was 11. It is art and maths with a whole lot of fun

Writing

This week I published my picture writing my lpg was 12


https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BwkdKSfRRM2nTDQ1ai0tUGRLT1k

reading

This week for a reading response I did a know your charachter off the book badge of honour.

hand writing

 my lpg was slope in my hand writing  i achieved my goal

my lpg in writing this week was I can write all types of sentences that make sense and use mostly consistent tense

maths

My l.p.g in maths this week was multiplication and division facts . i got 100/100 in 5.07.

writing

This is my story about zombies check it out at pod 5 class room. my lpg in writing this week was 8 i can use a plan to show headings and distinguish main ideas from supporting ideas.

maths

This is my second best score in basic facts test. My lpg was 1o early division. I got 100 in 5.minutes and nine seconds.

READING

this is my 'dust jacket key' my lpg 2: i can make connections between my prior knowledge and the concrete in a text in order to understand abstract ideas in the text

This week in writing we did creative stuff we got a picture and we wrote what the picture is about to do. My lpg was 20.

maths

this week we worked on answering fractions in sentences. my lpg was order fractions.

writing Poems

My lpg this week in writing was: I can use contractions using apostrophes. This week we were learning about poems  and different types of poems.

fractions (maths)

This is re-learning fractions My goal was succeed (I did). My lpg was number was 10 ordering fractions.

Koru art

This is me and Raumati's art  we achieved our goals : finishing in time and cleaning up our mess.

My lpg this week was 9 I can write in different ways such as recount descriptive and more.

02/6/2017

Hurupaki should go back to single cell classroom.

I agree.

I do believe that Hurupaki school should go back to single cell classrooms. In a big classroom,  you have a the opportunity to muck around without the teachers noticing, because it’s a bigger class and teachers cannot always focus on you.

 It’s important for  us students that we get the attention we need for our early school career. In a big class you don’t get the attention that you would get in a single cell classroom, so in a single cell class you will find you get to ask the teacher for help more often.

There are my thoughts of why  Hurupaki should go back to single cell classrooms.

By Cohen

maths

this is my maths, i am learning to use tidy numbers to solve multiplication problems.

reading

this is my reading for this weak it was a know your character on the book "game over!!!"

MATHS

this is my  maths


my lpg was 23

this is lake ora retold by cohen. My lpg this week was 25

Do you remember the story of lake ora, sure you do.   Remember when the Face  used to be a clear blue. Remember the night of a full moon and the brave Warrior  went  out have a look and it was a TANIWHA.  Remember how he came back with a piece of Flesh .

Remember exactly One year after that night they saw the Taniwha and they heard a cry of the  chief’s daughter. Remember that same brave Warrior went out to have a play or a search  for the little girl and the fat Taniwha. Remember he searched for two whole days and nights but came back with nothing Now that’s why the lake is now a reddy brown colour. That’s the story of lake ora.

BY COHEN

reading activities

this is my reading activity for this week. I did a know your character of the book 'kauri island' .

procedual writing

this is my procedual writing about mr bs way of making a coffee. My lpg this week in writing  was no.# 23.

Mothers day card

this is my acrostic poem about my mum

30 word poem

This is my 30 word poem about me. We had to write exactly 30 words about our life. Trust me its harder than you think.

This is my rounding decimals.

 I'm rounding decimals to the nearest tenth.

Dear Mum

20 minutes ago I was getting pounded around by a big, grumpy, furious hawk. As he was about to fly away, then he spotted me…

I was just collecting nuts when I saw   I was getting watched. I went to hide in the leaves but I was just rustling around on the forest floor. He started gliding around swiftly and silently. I sped up as fast as I could.

Suddenly out of  nowhere  he was above me he was above me. I leaped across a tree and kept on running. He had an easy shot but he missed and tumbled on the solid ground. Then out of the corner of my eye I saw my drey.

I ran up to it and hid and stayed quiet as he shook my home. That hawk didn’t stop shaking until I fell out of the bottom. Jumping as high as I could, it was like I was flying. I slipped in a hole and that good old hawk couldn’t get me.

my maths

Dear Mum

20 minutes ago I was getting pounded around by a big, grumpy, furious hawk. As he was about to fly away, then he spotted me…

I was just collecting nuts when I saw   I was getting watched. I went to hide in the leaves but I was just rustling around on the forest floor. He started gliding around swiftly and silently. I sped up as fast as I could.

Suddenly out of  nowhere  he was above me he was above me. I leaped across a tree and kept on running. He had an easy shot but he missed and tumbled on the solid ground. Then out of the corner of my eye I saw my drey.

I ran up to it and hid and stayed quiet as he shook my home. That hawk didn’ t stop shaking until I fell out of the bottom. Jumping as high as I could, it was like I was flying. I slipped in a hole and that good old hawk couldn’t get me.

This is my free choice writing about game fishing.

14/03/17

This year not to long ago as we left the harbour to go marlin fishing, we glanced at a boat stuck up on  high rocks. The tide would of had to been really high to get this old fishing boat on the rocks.

Heading through the sugar-loaf and pinicles we start to get smashed by skippys(skipjack tuna). We hear on the vhf that a man caught a 300 to 400 kg blue marlin but that sounds like a lie.

I’m a ufc boxer fighting skippys,because I fight hard and get my fair catch. My poppa calls me a jona cause I havn’t caught a marlin yet. Our deckhand is Matty and Dad if Dad is not the angler for a big blue. When Jack and Andrew come out  I’m staying  the night on their  boat. When we had a few beers at the club we decided to head back to the boat. I grabbed my stuff and strolled to diversion (Andrews mates boat). Me and Jack played on the I-pad for a while and then crashed off to sleep.

Get up time to go, it was 6.15 and we were still in bed on a big riviera. Off we go to our boat and then head off beyond tutukaka. By the time we’re fully awake I forced myself to eat. Again through the pinicles we get about 12 or so skippys.

this Is my learning pit poster. The learning pit is pit what you fall in when you're stuck.

 Jumping as high as I can, suddenly I get gaffed.

Charging into a meatball,looks like I won't need dinner.

By Cohen

This is my texter artwork using complex sentences.This is 

TEXTER which is a website that you make sentences into art.

This is a Chesapeake bay retriever the breed of my dog.they are hunting dogs and they feel restricted when they are tied up (chained up)

hi my name is cohen and i love marlin fishing and my dad is away at the moment fishing this years Nationals