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Monday, 27 November 2017

fox writing - the sequel

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It was a frosty Dawn as dog awoke with an arrow through his heart.He was not having a good start to his day. he was mad / crying because of what his former best friend had done. Well dog was having a moment he did not know magpie was coming back.

This is Just beginning of magpies journey home. she was very hurt by Foxes painful words,  now they're in her head.  Stumbling home Magpie was thinking of the consequences of what she had done.

When Magpie finally reached home dog has fallen asleep. Almost as fast as someone who had just run a marathon. She thought, when dog wakes up, will he be happy? That is the complete opposite  of what dog was thinking in his furious mind. “ Even if he is happy he will know about the Incident  with Fox” whispered magpie to herself.
The swirling went in the night sky was like The windmills she visited when she could fly.She had that feeling when someone is using you, you can tell. But she wasn’t too sure.

Usually when dog woke He would great magpie with a gently morning, but this time He just snarled.  Magpie was wrong she knew something was happening. “Morning”Said magpie in encouraging voice.
“Why” Mumbled fox “Why” he Repeated loudly. “We were good team” He snarled again.
Then he ran away.

There magpie was alone like fox said. she had this non-stop pain pain in her heart. She lost her one and only friend It was her fault The pain was still there as she hobbled in the direction of Fox.

                                  By Cohen

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